CREATED BY
PETE JOHNSON & ADAM JONES
Written by
Pete Johnson / Adam Jones / Kyle McKenna
LOG LINE
A husband, desperate to escape his 40-year marriage, robs a bank in order to spend the rest of his life in jail only to get sentenced to HOUSE ARREST. Trapped in a prison he tried to escape, he hatches an elaborate escape plan that not only takes him to the ends of the earth but also teaches him how to operate as a master, international criminal.
Pilot Episode
Episode 1 | 22 Minutes |
THE SERIES
We’ve all seen them: the old couple at a restaurant. Sitting in the same booth. Morning after morning. Eating in absolute, excruciating silence.
That will never be us. We hope. How could we wind up like that? Nothing left to say, barely making eye contact—mired in routine and hardened into a single organism that hates itself. How could two people once so madly in love wither into combatants fighting a 40-year battle of attrition?
Maybe what we’re seeing isn’t a marriage after all? Maybe behind all that silence is a decades-long story of intrigue, betrayal, vengeance and deceit.
Maybe what we’re seeing is a life sentence with no hope of parole—playing out over pancakes and pills and passive aggressive passing of the salt.
Maybe what we’re seeing is the beginning of a new kind of prison escape story…
STORY
OUR STORY BEGINS at the home of RONNIE and TOM MANCUSO in the outer boroughs of New York City during the summer of 2019. Tom and Ronnie have been married for over 40 years, but the honeymoon isn’t just over, it’s long-dead. Decomposed. Buried in a box in the backyard of the only house they’ve ever owned.
We meet them on the week their lives will change forever. Tom, at his wits’ end and completely broken by years of contentious codependent marriage, decides he will withdraw every last cent of their meager savings to buy a gun and rob a bank with a singular purpose: to spend the rest of his life in jail—where he’ll be well out of reach from Ronnie. Everything goes according to plan until at trial, a judge sentences him to house arrest under Ronnie’s legal guardianship.
Defeated and incarcerated in the prison he risked everything to escape, Tom formulates an ingenious plan that tests his resourcefulness, takes him to the far corners of the earth and teaches him how to think and act like a criminal mastermind—while Ronnie stops at nothing to apprehend her prisoner.
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Episodes 1-9
INSPIRATION
INSPIRATION
Inspired by great prison escape movies, Better Half pits husband versus wife in an epic and darkly humorous tale of the lengths two people will go to flee or control the other.
Imagine a small suburban house as a supermax prison. Inside are Edith and Archie Bunker, except Edith is a shrewd warden with an axe to grind and Archie is a bumbling inmate who stumbles upon an air duct he can crawl through to freedom. Neighbors are fellow inmates, acquaintances are conspirators and family members are guards. Tethered by a GPS monitoring ankle bracelet and an empty bank account, Tom has nothing but time to plan the perfect exit.
Our story will follow a by-the-book Jail break narrative: Warden versus inmate in a game of wits, power and cleverness. As with the best shows (of any genre), it will be far more than just a prison escape story, and to the extent that it breaks new ground, it will do so not just because of its unexpected “prison” setting but also because of larger, universal themes of toxic codependency, and the human desire to live freely in a world that is increasingly constrictive.
Cinematic, unexpected and rooted in character, Better Half reinvents the jail break genre by keeping all the suspense, cleverness, humor and twists we love about prison escape stories, and places it in a familiar institution: Marriage.
CHARACTERS
THE WARDEN & THE PRISONER
RONNIE MANCUSO Tom’s wife and jailer, is a hard-as-nails retired high school secretary who, for 67 years, has been faithful to an aggressive no-holds-barred approach to daily domestic life. For Ronnie, everything must be in right angles. Everything must be cheap and joyless. Only three things give her happiness: attending fire and brimstone sermons at the local Catholic church, stocking her curio cabinet with elaborate ceramic figurines, and controlling Tom’s every move.
TOM MANCUSO is a 65-year-old navy vet and retired Radio Shack manager who is now a shadow of his former self. A broken man with big dreams and nothing left to lose, Tom splits his days between watching the weather channel, taking his pills, and trying to find human connection through his hobby: HAM Radios. He is tortured by his overbearing wife. When he gains the confidence to do something about it, he will discover a courage he never knew he had, and he will upend everything about his world and do whatever it takes to chase down his freedom.
THE KOREANS
YOUNG MAZINO is a 27-year-old errand boy for the Korean mob who does odd jobs at a gun store and hates every minute of it—especially his creepy boss: Schecter. Mazino does not respect authority and moonlights for rival gangs. His Uncle, Mr. Sang Dog, is the big boss and the only reason Mazino isn’t lying in a ditch somewhere. He flirts with danger at every turn, and risks it all to not only help Tom escape, but to find a new life for himself.
SCHECTER LEE is a 55-year-old gun runner for the Korean Mob who owns and operates a drug and gun front in Queens, NY. He is a ticket-taking, worker bee incapable of disrespect or insubordination. But Schecter has a dirty secret that, if it were exposed, would ruin his life. So he keeps a low profile and does what he’s told. When his boss makes him work with the unpredictable Young, his secret and his livelihood are put in jeopardy.
SANG DOG is a 60-year-old former HR manager at Samsung and Korean mafia strong man who runs a drug, gun and prostitution ring in Queens, NY. His power is unmatched and his reach is long. Sang Dog is not a man you cross. His only rival, a Greek mob boss by the name of Nic, is coming for his crown, forcing Sang Dog to use the full weight of his unchecked influence and firepower to prevent that from ever happening.
SPAWN WU is Mazino’s friend and blunted-out Guy Friday who helps execute all of his most hair-brained plans. Spawn drives a loud, yellow super-car that is his calling card.
HYOBEE MAZINO is Mazino’s mother and sidelined one-time crime boss. Once upon a time Sang Dog sent her back to Seoul, and she never forgave him and never put to bed the idea of exacting her revenge on him.
THE GREEKS
NIC is a 45-year-old, low-IQ Greek tough guy from Queens, NY who operates a small time drug and prostitution ring out of The Golden Reef Diner. Nic is a hot-headed metal-head with big plans to oust Sang Dog’s control of the underground economy. His connection to the “old world” keeps him in business, but also hampers him as he is always doing personal favors for his handlers in Athens. Favors like babysitting his Cousin Cosmos for the summer.
OLYMPIA is the general manager of the Golden Reef Diner. She sees all, knows all and by the end of season one, she will be revealed as the mastermind and Lady MacBeth of the Greek underground.
COSMOS is a 20-year-old scumbag from Greece who was sent to NY to avoid a murder trial. Cosmos is always looking for trouble, finds it and then needs to be rescued from the blow back. He’s a liability in every way and Nic tries to pass him off to anyone who owes him. Cosmos is a true killer and proves much more capable that he first seems...
THE COPS
NEPHEW JOSEPH is Ronnie’s sister’s son and this rotten apple didn’t fall far from her poisonous tree. Joseph is a dirty NYPD narcotics officer who uses his power and station to control others and benefit himself. He’s in charge of an elaborate digital sting operation where he collects and controls gang communication in Queens.
SPECIAL AGENT MARQUES GATTRELL is a DEA climber with big ambition and even bigger problems. As a recovering alcoholic and drug addict, Gattrell finds himself surrounded by confiscated product and at the spear’s tip of temptation. He will do anything to expedite promotion, and bends every rule to make it so.
THE NEIGHBORS
KIKI MILLER is Shantee’s mom and force of nature. 49, smart as a whip and unwilling to bend to anybody, she is an unstoppable force to Ronnie’s immovable object and will not suffer the casual racism and homophobia she endures as one half of a new black lesbian couple in town.
SHANTEE MILLER is a 16-year-old high school junior who just moved into the house across the street from the Mancusos. Shantee’s eyes never leave her phone. A modern social media zombie, Shantee unwittingly helps Tom in his escape.
GERI MILLER is Shantee’s other mother. Ronnie thinks Geri and Kiki are sisters, but they soon dispel that and it’s something the very Catholic Ronnie cannot handle. Geri is the less intense and more reasonable half of the Miller parents.
THOMAS BRAITHWAITHE is the retired owner of a booming septic cleaning business on the North Shore of Long Island. He is a sliver-haired lothario roaming the halls of the Crest Hollow over 70 community looking for touch.
THE BUREAUCRACY
MINTON CULBREATH is Tom (And Mazino’s) parole officer. A straight-laced ex marine, Minton is most at home in the middle of red tape lifestyle. He is a bureaucratic machine with no off switch and no room for error. High-and-tight, by-the-book. All day long.
SHAWN the owner and proprietor of Dawn’s Pawns, is a low-level broker with an encyclopedic knowledge of collectibles, antiques and ephemera. For Shawn, the law is merely a guide line to be followed only when it suits him.
SUNIR THE MAILMAN Sunir has been the Mancuso’s mailman for 30 years. He knows everything about them, their neighbors and the neighborhood. Sunir is Tom’s default lifeline to the wider world and shares Tom’s hatred of Ronnie.
FATHER FREDRICO is a 40-year old Catholic priest who doesn’t have room for interpretation of the good book. Unconcerned by the modern reformation, his particular brand of fire and brimstone lights a warm glow in Ronnie’s cold heart.
STRUCTURE
SEASON 1 STRUCTURE
Better Half is structured like a four act prison break saga: Each season will be treated like an individual movie with a beginning, middle and end.
“The Escape”
Act One (Episodes 1-3) will depict Tom’s attempt to rob a bank, escape Ronnie, and the resulting sentence of house arrest. Ronnie will put Tom on lockdown and smolder over the new African American family (The Millers) who moved in next door. Ronnie’s nephew Joseph reluctantly gives Tom an iPhone and Mazino wades into a dangerous freelance agreement with a rival Greek gang leader who forces him to take Cosmos, a bumbling young hitman, on as a protege. By the end of the act our disparate characters will all be intertwined in the beginning stages of Tom‘s escape plan.
Act Two (Episodes 4-6) will follow the complex web Tom has created as his escape plan grows in intensity. Mazino blackmails Schecter to keep him from ratting him out to Sang Dog, and enlists Tom to set up a radio network for his drug ring; A basement flood reveals Ronnie’s hidden treasure, and after a trip to the emergency room, Tom discovers a way to detach his ankle bracelet. Cosmos finds himself the victim of a serious accident inadvertently caused by Mazino. Schecter’s secret is revealed and after Sang Dog assassinates him for it, Mazino steals his former boss’ most prized possession: Santa Anna’s priceless, antique sidearm. The act will end with the stakes of Tom’s escape sufficiently raised.
Act Three (Episodes 7-8) will climax with the escape plan coming to life. Ronnie is distracted by their money troubles. Tom secretly sells Ronnie’s treasure for an ungodly amount of money and after Mazino realizes Tom’s HAM radio skills could be used to level-up his drug enterprise, he signs on to help Tom escape. Our season culminates in a nail-biting finale where Tom defies all odds and escapes prison for good—disappearing with Mazino to his native home of South Korea. After realizing they've been betrayed, Ronnie, Sang Dog, and the State of New York will each stop at nothing to find them. Except everyone finds themselves trapped inside their own prisons as Covid-19 spreads across the globe and clears the way for Tom and Mazino to escape the hounds...At least for now.
SEASON 2 STRUCTURE
“THE MANHUNT”
Act One (Episodes 1-3)
In this act, we find Tom and Mazino in the perfect hideout: A foreign country on strict Covid lockdown where everyone is wearing masks. Mazino’s mother, an old battle axe in her own right who holds a deep grudge for Sang Dog, harbors the fugitives but does not trust Tom. Similarities of his relationship with Ronnie begin to take hold. Mazino takes a massive risk by borrowing millions in start-up money from a rival Korean Loan Shark and uses it to create a HAM radio network that super-charges his cousin’s North Korean poppy smuggling operation. Back in the states, everyone is house-bound because of Covid-19. Ronnie doesn’t wear a mask and quickly becomes even more of a pariah but finds a new suitor in a septic company owner. The NYPD disciplines Joseph and puts him at a desk job where he bides his time searching relentlessly for Tom. The act ends with Cosmos assuming power of the Greeks which triggers a war between the Greeks and the Koreans.
Act Two (Episodes 3-5)
Tom and Mazino are having great success with the HAM network—cash and drugs are pouring in. Tom is loving his new life and freedom and purpose, but when an overzealous employee of the South Korean Telecom authority stumbles on the HAM towers, he shuts it down causing the Loan Shark to call in his vig—leaving Mazino and Tom wholly unprepared and unable to pay. Broke and facing down the wrath of the Korean mob, Mazino heads back to the States to retrieve Santa Anna’s gun and sell it to pay off their loan. Meanwhile, Joseph is hot on their trail and makes a deal with Sang Dog to use his connections in Korea to apprehend Tom. Ronnie puts the house on the market and makes plans to move into an over 70 community with her new beau, but refuses to sell to any black families, sparking even more neighborhood tension. Cosmos hunts down Spawn Wu for answers.
Act Three (Episodes 6-8)
With Mazino back in the US, Tom and Mazino’s mom are spending a lot of time together. Their relationship is becoming exactly like his and Ronnie’s: Contentious, codependent and broken. Ronnie consummates her relationship with the Septic lover but while making love, the Septic man breaks Ronnie’s hip, sending her to the hospital and into a deep, dark depression. Mazino has to retrieve the gun where he left it: Ronnie and Tom’s house. To gain entry, he poses as a buyer and barely escapes with the gun. Joseph is alerted to Mazino’s whereabouts through homeland security—causing Mazino to flee for the Texas border and reverse escape the US with Santa Anna’s gun. Sang Dog’s thugs arrive in Seoul to kill Tom but Mazino’s mom thwarts his assassination, which in turn ends the season with the two falling deeply into a strange old-age love.
SEASON 3 STRUCTURE
“ON THE LAM”
Act One (Episodes 1-3)
Mazino lays low in Mexico trying to find a buyer for Santa Anna’s gun and a way back to Korea. After finding dead ends at every Mexican auction house, Mazino attends the Telemundo version of Antiques Road show and piques the interest of one particularly rabid viewer: Ramon Orosco, the head of the Zeta drug cartel. Tom and Mazino’s Mom are locked away in a hideout avoiding more Korean thugs. Tom and Mazino communicate via Ham radio as Tom and his mother grow deeply codependent. Joseph’s pact with Sang Dog crumbles after Cosmos takes control of his turf, and Joseph is forced into early retirement. Ronnie finds herself in an assisted living facility learning to walk again. She is broke and desperate for money when Kiki and Geri make an offer on her house.
Act Two (Episodes 3-5)
Ramon abducts Mazino and brings him to his estate in Juarez where Mazino gives him the gun and explains his situation. They become friendly and Ramon is intrigued by the HAM radio system and makes plans to extract Tom and Mazino’s mother from Korea. Joseph, disgraced and now alone in the world, hustles in the neighborhoods he once policed. He double crosses Cosmos to help Sang Dog regain his stature. Ronnie reluctantly sells the house to the Millers and uses the money to hire a sleazy lawyer to sue for possession of her porcelain figurines.
Act Three (Episodes 6-8)
Mazino gets comfortable in the Juarez cartel and finds his place in the world: Consigliarie to a mexican cartel leader, but his sudden rise angers many jealous soldiers and puts him in danger. Tom and Mazino’s Mom are extracted from their hideout in Seoul in a daring plot hatched by the Mexican cartel and arrive with Mazino who realizes they are in love. Tom creates the HAM network for the cartel and begins to treat mazino as a father would and things get very uncomfortable. Ronnie loses a court case to retrieve the money she is owed, and now has significant legal fees. The season ends with Cosmos and Sang Dog engaging in a final and lethal showdown where Sang Dog comes out on top and makes Joseph his right hand man.
SEASON 4 STRUCTURE
“CAPTURE”
Act One (Episodes 1-3)
Agent Gattrell of the DEA leads a task force to take down the Cartel. Joseph, hell bent on revenge, dimes all the information he needs to intercept their communications over the HAM network. Things start going very badly for Ramon and Tom is to blame. Ramon begins to believe that Tom is nothing more than a bad luck charm. Mazino, afraid for his mother’s life tries to plan an escape from the cartel, but his mother will not go without Tom. Ronnie, living in squalor, gets word that her Septic lover died and left her everything. With her new-found fortune, Ronnie buys a fancy house on Long Island’s North shore and begins exacting revenge on her enemies. Sang Dog reemerges as the underground boss and Joseph gets lost in power.
Act Two (Episodes 3-5)
Mazino contacts Sang Dog as a last ditch effort for help. Sang Dog agrees to help if he delivers Tom to Joseph. Mazino is torn, but chooses his mother and agrees to double cross and deliver Tom. Sang Dog helps them escape just before agent Gattrell leads a force to dismantle the cartel. Ronnie goes into business with Joseph and quickly becomes an integral part of the Sang Dog enterprise.
Act Three (Episodes 6-8)
Mazino, Tom and Mazino’s mom arrive back in Queens under the protection of Sang Dog. Mazino betrays Tom. And Tom is handed over to Joseph who in turn brings him to face his one-time jailor: Ronnie. Mazino’s mom cannot believe her son did this to Tom and goes off the reservation to help rescue the love of her life, again. Ramon tells Agent Gatrell about Tom and the DEA acts quickly to apprehend him. In a final show down, Mazino’s mom kills Ronnie before Ronnie kills Tom and right after, the DEA arrests Tom and Mazino for international drug trafficking. Putting him away for the rest of his life. As originally intended.
END SERIES
TONE & STYLE
CINEMATIC
UNEXPECTED
MULTI-DIMENSIONAL, VISUALLY STUNNING, DIVERSE.
TONE & STYLE
The visual style will be cinematic and colorfully true to the hardscrabble reality of multicultural working class Queens. Flashbacks and abstract flights of fancy break up the sometimes brutalist textures and muted, urban realities—giving us cracks and glimpses into character, detail and motivation. The framing will be bold, and the pacing will increase steadily as we get closer and closer to each season’s unexpected conclusion.
Since the first season of Better Half is about imprisonment, we will create a sense of claustrophobic humanity. The narrative will be dripping with specific regional details that invoke the reality of a prison: Hopelessly beautiful art direction of small spaces, drab municipal buildings, traffic jams, jam-packed sprawl, fluorescent lighting, lack of personal space, tribalism.
Since the second season revolves around the idea of being on the run, our pacing quickens, our claustrophobia lifts and we begin to fluidly morph the style of filming with the tone of the story. This technique will be a north star we utilize throughout the series.
Music will be original, diegetic, stirring and often quirky—utilizing a range of youthful genres that contrast nicely with the advanced age of our main characters.
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CONTACT: PETE JOHNSON
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